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Essay Writing の思考プロセス 第53回

2019年04月29日

今回の Topic は、Official Guide to the TOEFL の Independent Essay 第9問です。

1. Topic           

      A company is going to give some money either to support arts or protect the environment.  Which do you think the company to choose? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.

2. Struture

a) Thesis Statement (Introduction)                

    In my opinion, the company should choose to spend money on protecting the environment since establishing environmentally conscious and friendly image would boost the company’s profile much more than spending money on supporting arts.

b) Body の部分を構成する3つの Paragraph の Main Idea は、

第1 Paragraph 環境は我々の健康、福祉、そして日常生活に直接関係する為、環境保護に注力している企業は消費者の好印象をもたらす

第2 Paragraph 環境保護によって農業、林業、漁業の生産は上昇し、それが経済成長へとつながり、更には消費を刺激し、当該企業に利益をもたらす

第3 Paragraph 良好な自然環境は、芸術家の創作意欲を高める為、環境保護は間接的な芸術の振興策ともなる

 

3. Sample

     In my opinion, the company should choose to spend money on protecting the environment since establishing environmentally conscious and friendly image would boost the company’s profile much more than spending money on supporting arts.        

     To begin with, having good environment is directly related to our health, wellbeing, and daily life.  These days, we have become aware whether companies, especially multinational large corporations, are committed to protecting the environment or not.  Now that we clearly understand that climate change is the consequences of environmental deterioration, protecting the environment should be crucial not only to our health but also to our wellbeing.  Therefore, we would buy products or services from environmentally conscious and friendly companies.                

     In addition, protecting the environment should indirectly contribute to the company’s revenue growth.  Without healthy environment, agriculture, forestry, and fishery could not maintain sustainable growth.  Therefore, protecting and improving natural environment should have positive impact on agriculture, forestry, and fishery.  Then, accelerated production in these primary industries should stimulate overall economic growth and finally general consumption.  The company would benefit from this positive economic cycle.                                                                                                        

     Finally, protecting and improving the natural environment would inspire the artists in the wide range of areas, such as poetry, music, and paintings.  Therefore, by spending money on protecting the natural environment, the company also indirectly helps the artists create works inspired by the beauties and wonders of the environment.  However, the opposite cannot always be said, because supporting arts would not necessarily lead to the raised awareness of protecting the natural environment.                  

     It is true that supporting arts also improve the profile of the company through diverse cultural events sponsored by the company.  However, because of the three reasons I mentioned above the company should choose to spend money on protecting the environment.

 

To be continued.

次回の更新予定日は5月13日(月)となります。